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Of conic design, this giant remains
Pulled up from earth, and reaching for sky
A stone in slumber, although her veins
Pump hot garnet rage; keep her alive

From above all, she watches downward
With one cold eye, in her earth-cast center
Volcano finds herself feeling ignored,
Envious of all the life below her

For immeasurable time, all she has seen
Is the mobility others have been allowed
Yet take for granted, it appears obscene
To she who when stirred sometimes sets free a cloud

The Natives below lark about
Peaceful and keen, they have no knowledge
Of fear, they are happy, have no doubt
That they are secure from all carnage

Suddenly, the island sways on its waves
Rocks dance furiously on the ground
The sky fills with blood, like a vicious rave,
Natives are tossed and thrown abound

Screams claw their way through the thick gray
As heat pours down onto the village
Life melts off, then is carried away
Nothing is spared, all is pillaged

A raw smolder is all that remains
Volcano has had her way.
I guess this in a sense could accompany my clock, just thought of that...
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AbundantAmenities Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2007  Hobbyist
Quite clever,

second verse doesn't seem to rhyme/flow as well as the others.

Very well done.
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retreating-hope Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2007
YOU DON'T RHYME OR FLOW AS WELL AS OTHERS.

...Yeah, I know.
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AbundantAmenities Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2007  Hobbyist
*is hurt*

*is not hurt*

yeah well, yo mumma dont rhyme...

AT ALL.
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retreating-hope Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2007
Really?

Dammmmnnnnnnn...
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retreating-hope Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2007
*stare*

...*blink*
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:iconabundantamenities:
AbundantAmenities Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007  Hobbyist
Damn is right,

snap that back bitch!

throw you in the back seat, run you like a track meet.
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